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for Bygones

by 8inchCaliper

schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An odd assortment of feelings this one stirs. I'm not sure I'm pleased with the them fathering a child thing there but you mellow it out with the fact that they're in it because they promised Shelley- that their 'love' and whatnot is because of a promise to Shelley. So that softens that betrayal for me. The passionate scene betwixt the three of them was excellently penned.

Cheers,
~CC
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story!
person Naja Mottelson
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a marvellous story. It is quite rare to find a fanfic-author who treats the borrowed characters with enough integrity and thruthfulness as to their personalities, to make erotic fiction believable. I'm amazed at how romantic your ending is, when it still is devoid of involuntary ridiculousness. Most "let's get married and have a baby, though we started out hating each other"-endings are quite different from yours and, sadly, handled with much less skill. Good one! Yay!
person Camerata
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was really great ! Bravo :)
person Angie30
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I really enjoyed reading it
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty funny that you write a story on Blow Dry, I just watched the movie last Thursday so I was still very much in the middle of the story. I liked this one better than the others ones you wrote, two thumbs up!
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really well done. Unexpected, sad and beautiful. Go you!