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for In Love And Death

by VenusMoon

person Kerrie
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!! You have to write more today!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Darkness_Is_Falling
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cliffhanger much?

:waitsfornextchapter:
person Seria
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sparkles with a glimmer of hope* C'mon guys... you're meant to be... can't you see it? *crosses fingers*
person Kerrie
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! I HOPE EVERYTHING GOES FINE BETWEEN GEE AND BERT!!!!!!!!!!! I HOPE BERT DIDN'T FIND ANOTHER LOVER!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Darkness_Is_Falling
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. awesome story. please keep writing.
person Kerrie
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!!!! That 6th chapter made me cry!!! You have to write more soon!!! Please!!!!
person Seria
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tries to pick up the pieces of her shattered heart*
person Seria
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I've been reading this fic since you first started posting it and I've been hooked the whole time. I check daily for updates on it. *_* I'm an EMT (Emergency Medical Technician) and when Gee had his heart attack I-- literally-- hit the floor. I was stunned that you wrote it because it's SO COMMON among drug addicts; especially chronic cocaine users. A lot of people don't know that. My father had a heart attack at Gee's age because of cocaine use. Most drug addicts OD and then go into cardiac arrest, it gets textbook stuff after a while. ("*is called to the scene of an unresponsive 20-ish-something year old pt* *gets on scene and sees all the signs of a drug addict* ... *tries to wake the pt and gets baseline vitals* ... *no pulse, no breathing* ... *sighs* Get the AED, I'll start compressions...") You rock my 'verse.

You have to update soon, the wait is killing me! ;_;
person Kerrie
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!! This is the best fic I have ever read!!! I love it!!!!
person tesla
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay the heart attack was a little fucked. overdose would have been better but other than that it's all good. PLEASE UP-FUCKING-DATE!!!!!!!