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for Crystalline Wings

by Zarim

schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow I loved that !! Kaoru is so evil and Toshiya is so sexy! awwe I wish there was more T_T
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!! poor toshiya! please don't tell me that he's getting used to this sexual harrassment and rape!!! DIE IS BETTER FOR TOSHIYA!!! tell him!!!
ASOTA
person Alouqua
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woa this is really good! I need more of this...
please continue as soon as possible
person ^^
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Write more...I'm very interested. <.< it's hot.
person ky
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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very well written~!
..very evil boss. XDDD
i love the whole thing overall though n_n
person Lisa
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah! This is absolutely wonderful! You must write and post the next chapter soon, ne??? ^_^
person Kashshaptu
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kaoru is such a weird boss! XD Poor Totch though. I think Kaoru should be way nicer....yes, he should XD Continue soon please!^_^
person Cassie ^__^
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW WOW!!! I loved the new chapter! It seems like Kaoru might becoming less of an ass!! He even smiled!! Poor Toshiya is powerless against him!! I wonder how long has Kaoru been keeping an eye on Totchi? Is he obsessed with him; what started all this!! What is Kaoru's main goal besides embarassing him, hurting him, and giving him limited choices!! I love the story so I hope to read lots more soon! ^__~
person Blackandblueromance
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One word

BadAss

And yea its all one word

Update ^-^
person Gem
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, poor Totchi. I kinda want him to sock Kaoru for making him feel like a victim! All in all, very very good! You must write more please!!!