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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah... it was funny and... *thinks* I like it! Kyo and Die are.. cute... sexy.. well... I don't know xD But Kyo is a brat.. what did he do? xDDD I want more... XD
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another great story that I must beg you to continue! I loved it! I want it to keep going it doesn't seem finished! I wonder if Totchi feel trap to that same question Die asked as well or did he ask something different! I hope to read lots more by you! ^__~
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice,my favourite pairing *_*
We just need more of it!
Please keep writing ^^
Good job!
We just need more of it!
Please keep writing ^^
Good job!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really nice story.
it was a bit hard to read though, speaking marks ("") and some more blank lines would have made it easier to read though.
a sequel would be lovely.
it was a bit hard to read though, speaking marks ("") and some more blank lines would have made it easier to read though.
a sequel would be lovely.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah o.o nice! ^.^ i know this was a one shot but i must say...WRITE MORE!!! ^^
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Iiiiiikkkkkhhhh! *eating her fingers*
I love you, I love you, I love you!
This one simply has the kind of atmosphere I love. I need a sequel!
I love you, I love you, I love you!
This one simply has the kind of atmosphere I love. I need a sequel!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was good but you need to have a beta. There were a lot of simple grammer errors, even reading it over yourself would have enabled you to catch them. So just get someone to read it over for you next time and it will make it all the better.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice without a lot of discription as you stated in the summary. it'd be nice to see more fics along these lines. perhaps a bit more detailed next time? leaves pocky.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This rocked.
Make a sequel!
Make a sequel!