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I love it! The prologe is shocking. And then the begining of the whole store..HE was going to ask ger marry him!!! OMG OK I'm sorry! I't great beginign I'm sure it's gona be a amazing fanfic!

oh please tell me she didn't die!!!!!!!!!

im liking it...definatly need more xx

I like it. Keep going. Keep Writing.
MORE MORE MORE

this sounds like a great idea for a story.
maybe you could substitute a few of the 'Cassandra's for 'her' or 'she' to even things out a little?
look forward to more chapters!

hey you ever gonna fuckin update or what? its good so update for christ sakes!

I can see that you've worked on this story, and put some thought into it. But you have a long way to go yet- I hope you enjoy every step of the journey!
Your grammer, my darling, is atrocious. Your sentences run into each other, as if you'd forgotten where to put periods and question marks. I can see a good plot about to happen, but I want to mark up your work with a red pencil!
In this second chapter- a "Great Dame" would have big hips and gorgeous boobs. A "Great Dane" has four feet and a waggy tail :D
Is this dog going to show up further along in the story? Because, if not- you could lose it altogether, and no one would miss it.
Keep writing! I want to know how it all comes out!

Like your story so far. The plot is believable, so it makes the story really good. What I would give to have that job and able to see him everday and get to talk to him, not to mention be able to get that close and get paid to touch him!! Can't wait for the next chapter.

so far so good. keep going with it. update soon.

be more relistic