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for Giving up

by fonulyn

person E
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was sad ;_; And well written
person Kaishiou
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the ending almost got me. it was nicely written and sad too. i like it.
person Takahisa
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Those last lines really got to me.
What a way to end it.
My chest tightened at that... open to a possiblity of crying.


Quite perfect.
person yami990(toolazy to sign in)
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very short and sad. 5/5
person Yuna_Asakura
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!! *sob sob* That's sooo sad!!! *sniff snif* I liked it! It's really good!! ^ ^
Ja ne~ Yuna Asakura
person kyoko
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was soo sad!!!!!!! T^T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cries*