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by shibbydm

schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, loved it. Update soon.
person Kiana Sumpter
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg you are the best author i have ever read stories from i am simply stunned no words can describe how good both of your stories are. Well done truly well done.
person challen
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shibs. What's up? Do you have a new beau or something?
person anon
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
REMARKABLE!
person phantomskye
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Horseback riding is not hard once you have confidence and the animal knows you are leading...

It isnt rocket science you know!!!

Shibby wonderful story I like it so much...

I love the conflict of the ex being pregnant shows her true colors of being what she is a slut the main characters are wonderful..

And I love how romantic your gerry is...

now if we can clone someone like that in real life...

I cannot wait for the update!!!

person shibbydm
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey guys, thanks for all commenting....a few comments of my own...

Gaps of Misery - Thank you for all your support all throughout all of my silly love tales.

Angel - I had a horse and was terrfied, but i was on it for an hour and was galloping free as anything ebuase i lost my fear, i had people around me i trusted and kind of wanted to use that. But i understand what you are saying, i rushed it a bit. Sorry.

Anon - Thanks!
person Gaps of Misery
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. that last part was SO awesome!! Now that it's out I think they'll have some serious talk that's leading straight to bed. ;) Fantastic work, hon!!! :)
person rebecca
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! so good!
don't stop!
he loves her!
person Gaps of Misery
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"... and like all other penises wasn’t exactly beautiful" - I had the laugh of my life while reading that!!! *lol* Oh my God, this was both hilarious AND amazing. Very, very amazing. I desperately want more, to put it mildly. ;)
person anon
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story...again
dump the Katy line-
concentrate on a villa in Italy!