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for Immortal

by shibbydm

person Random Reader
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great storytelling!!! There has to be some conflict in a good story, and you sure know how to bring it on!
person Angel
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There are more speeds on a horse that just walk and gallop - maybe you should try canter! Plus, how is someone who's only spent what? and hour or more meant to be able to go straight into a gallop? Try something slower :P
person Gaps of Misery
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope this won't honestly be too good to be true cuz it's getting better and better with every chapter. ;) Brilliant and touching as ever - and very, very sweet!!! You are SO gifted! :)
person rebecca
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beautiful story. I just don't like where it is going with the katy thing-
person Gaps of Misery
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter... my God, where do you get all those beautiful sentences and sweet ideas??? *lol* :)
person rebecca
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dying for an update!
person Gaps of Misery
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unexpected turn, but really really good! I'm utterly amazed, as usual with your chapters, and I'm dying for the next update!! :)
person Gaps of Misery
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where are the ten stars to rate this??? *lol* Seriously, if this story will only be half as good as your other Gerry fanfic, I'll go mad with joy... you just have an excellent writing and amazing ideas!! :D
person Random Reader
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh thankyou, another story from you, and it's looking good..! Loving the slow pace and the well developed characters.
person rebecca
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
looking great! such a treat to read something romantic, hopeful and sweet. why not make it be happy?