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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the worst French/English translation I ever read. It doesn't make any sense, I had to read what you wrote in English to understand what Vanessa and Gail were saying (I'm French).
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh phooey! And I was getting ready for another lusty sex scene. After all John's already at home doing it with Van!
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man...I'm dying for the rest. Maybe Van and Markus will cheat on Gail and Johnny and that will be their out to gain their freedom to be together!
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My dear, I do believe that this story is not getting the credit that it deserves!
I truly love it, and have read it twice. I hope you see you writing more in the future.
I truly love it, and have read it twice. I hope you see you writing more in the future.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, wow....it's really good.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is very good so far, and I have just one question:
In your reference to Jean-Michel Basquiat, it says that Gail knew/knows him. What is the time period of this story? Jean-Michel died in 1988. Not to be a snob or anything, lol, I'm just giving you a heads up.
I like it, I like it. Keep it up.
In your reference to Jean-Michel Basquiat, it says that Gail knew/knows him. What is the time period of this story? Jean-Michel died in 1988. Not to be a snob or anything, lol, I'm just giving you a heads up.
I like it, I like it. Keep it up.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is pretty good, keep up the good work!