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for My Brother's Blood Machine

by NHB

person Bex
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Powerful stuff, and really well written.
Well done!
person This Razor Romance
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. Fucking. Brilliant.
person syntheticillusion
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am staring at the computer monitor in awe at the moment. This story is....wow. Amazing! Confusing, but not in a bad way. I love it. I fucking love it! I swear im stuck on stupid right now. My mind can't even form a complete thought, never mind a sentence. That summary at the beginning of the first chapter, did you think of that yourself? If so....wow. It was amazing. I LOVE IT! It was brilliant! I cant believe it...You are an amazing author. AMAZING!
person a mcr fan
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THE NEW UPDATE!!!!!! this story is really good, please continue very soon. PLEASE!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UUPPPPPPDDDDAAAATTTTEEEE!!!!! -head explodes-
person poe
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to tell you that i don't think i've ever read a story that affected me the way this has. it was so amazingly well-written, and the events, how they unfolded, the dialogue between them, everything was just perfectly put together in a frenzy of words. i seriously felt like i was on something while reading about gerard's actions! it was beautiful, and intoxicating, and i wanted you to know that! well done :)
person Obbit
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooo~ please continue soon!
person poe
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fuck, i am madly in love with this story. it is crazy, and drugged and insane, and hyper, and so so so so SO addicting! please update soon!
person a mcr fan
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa that was deep, please continue i would like to no what happens. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!
person Lizz
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this. It's all... weird I guess... and I love it.
Did they just crash? Hmm...
Post part three soon!
Can't wait!
person Lizz
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap this is amazing. You're amazing. This is one of the best things I've read lately...
I really hope to see more soon!!
...I just have to say that whole brother and mother thing. Gross. Lol, it make me laugh though.

I'm glad it was 'Heads'.
Can't wait for more!
=)