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update. i love this. u should have them married in the end or something. and if they are going to have sex, let Sierra limping thing that most people don't believe that happens. i always wanted to see that happen to someone story. think about it and keep on going.

Ohh! i like this! i hope to read more. obviously i can't until March, but i'm hoping for a lovely update then. don't make her too lonely for too long! And let Orli recover!lol. i really like this. your not rushing it. you're just sort of letting it be normal. in a good way. write more!

Ok, wow! I have to say that I am so suprised at how great this story is and you haven't even really started yet! I love the easy flow it has and the interaction between them is amazing. I can not WAIT for an update on this. The only thing this story needs is longer chapters.. because I am selfish...;) Thanks for posting this!

LOL! What a first impression. Her luggage opening up and spilling out all over the place, only to have her panties spill out and land on Orli.

Hey that was a really good start! I would like to read more of it. I think it's great that you didn't do the whole "I don't recognie Orlando Bloom" thing!!! (tho I've done it before ;-)
Anyways, it sounds like it's gonna be interestsing. Loved the panty thing...Just when you think it can't get any worse....;-)
Keep up the good work!
xxx Lauraxxx