rate_review Reviews

What i just read was wonderful. i've never read something like that. your characterization is impeccable: i never liked bam's much , but yours makes him to be somebody more real than its real self. the characters were not overly feminine in their exchanges, and this pleased me to no end. They made me cry, they made me laugh, they made me think of human nature, and really that was what i really never expected from a fanfic... you are a very sensitive writer, with an uncanny perception of the things really important in life, and i cannot thank you enough for the wonderful hours you made me spend with these amazing products of your imagination. i also liked very much your style: it's direct and poetic at the same time, you don't dwell on innecessary details and you wrap your reader in the windwhirl of your complex creation...keep on on going...i expect the best from you!!!! Again, thank you!!!
nerimari

Really good cant wait for the update!

This story was amazing. It was sweet and sensative. I think I almost cried, lol.
Toward the end, when they find Ville throwing up, I figured the whole part about the concussion making him sick was bullshit, not just that he had fallen and hit head. I thought he over-dosed on his nice little pills and had a reaction. Anything, this was a great story. Really pulled at my heartstrings. Poor Ville... I can relate to him in so many ways here, it really hits close to home. Not with the rapings, or pills, or anything extreme, but with being told it's not your fault, it's not your fault, it's not your fault; and rawness of his wrists and embarrassment of trying to hide them.
Wonderful write. It was very well written! Keep penning!!

-Moose: OUT

You. Cannot. Do. That.

Write more. Like, now? PLEASE?

*dies and needs more*

Great story, I really love it, and I'm hoping for a next chapter..
So much unraveling, keeps you on the edge...
Keep up the great work! ^^

Yay, update- finally. I haven't even got a clue how long I wanited for that. But it was worth it.

*sigh* Wish you'd write more? I'll give you cookies...

-x-Valo

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!YOU UPDATED!!!!!! I think you should do a sequal!!!!! This story is so good!!!! i actually thought he was cutting himself but WOW!!!!! THAT WAS SUCH A GREAT PLOT!!!!!!!!! I WANT TO HUG YOU SO BAD!!!!!!!

I don't remember if I reviewed this already. I might've done so as VampireValo. I don't remember.

But yeah. I want to to go and write more. ): Because I see a bunch of new stories and just... Ergh. I really liked this one.

I really HATE when people hold chapters hostage for reviews. But apparently it works, because you got your fucking wish.

That said, this story is amazing. I can't stop thinking about it, now. I like the pace it's moving at - slowly - because so often stories rush to say everything before there's even anything to say. And, needless to say, the plot is completely intriguing.

I'm really hoping you get enough reviews to match your ransom price and update soon.

Soooo are ya gunna finish this fic...Let me know at bloodrayne_5555@yahoo.com.....