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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, and dang and blast for the cliff hanger. You're evil, you know that?
I love what you've done wit the characters, making them IC as much as possible but still twaking with things to fit with your story, to make it believable.
The tension in the chapters is excellent and feels very real, the hurt and the panic in the last chapter.
Good job, can't wait for an update.
I love what you've done wit the characters, making them IC as much as possible but still twaking with things to fit with your story, to make it believable.
The tension in the chapters is excellent and feels very real, the hurt and the panic in the last chapter.
Good job, can't wait for an update.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, please update soon! I need to know what happens to him. Nothing really really bad, right? And Mike and Billie... Gosh, I love this, I love you, you're amazing, thank you.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH! THE CLIFFHANGER!!! *twitch* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO HIM!!!!
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More more more!
I love this. Poor Billie Joe. And poor Mike. They can't get divorce, can they? They belong to each others, naturally.
I love the way you describe the kids. I loved that thing already in 'How We Got Here' and I think you're getting better all the time. Anyway, I'd love to read more this.
I love this. Poor Billie Joe. And poor Mike. They can't get divorce, can they? They belong to each others, naturally.
I love the way you describe the kids. I loved that thing already in 'How We Got Here' and I think you're getting better all the time. Anyway, I'd love to read more this.
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have to write more! i need to know what's happens!