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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, girl. KEEP GOING!!!!
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, lordy... [[Still not logged in, lol.]]
Sweetie, could you fix up the diologue?
It bugs me how it's not propper...
"Things should be like this," She said simply.
"Written in a different paragarph for ever time a person speeks?" He inner vioce asked.
"Yes," she answered, sounding a bit cross. "Exactly."
Lol.. sorry. It was just bugging me, horribly.
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Sweetie, could you fix up the diologue?
It bugs me how it's not propper...
"Things should be like this," She said simply.
"Written in a different paragarph for ever time a person speeks?" He inner vioce asked.
"Yes," she answered, sounding a bit cross. "Exactly."
Lol.. sorry. It was just bugging me, horribly.
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm getting off soon but....that. Is. FUCKED. UP. DAMN that Dr. Harvey, and I use the Honorific "Dr." loosely. Jeez, he hasn't even molested Gerard yet, or raped him....unless you call undressing someone with your eyes during a therapy session molestation...but enough of my rambling.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!! I just started it and i couldn't stop, i read it all through, straight. So good!!! Get the next chapter up as soon as you can.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey keep writting i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i think yours storys preetty damn good! not a big fan of waycest though! but thats just me anyhoo mint story write more
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I just read this now and I mentally slap myself for not have reading it earlier. xD
I loved this. Please, post some more. =)
Oh, and the jaimaican accent made me giggle. =P
I loved this. Please, post some more. =)
Oh, and the jaimaican accent made me giggle. =P
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...UPDATE. That's really all I have to say, other than my rant about how I want My Mikey to be happy... But, yeah, update! Grr.
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! MORE UPDATES!!!! Doctor Harvey better stay away from Gee, that homicidal pshycopath. He's the one who should be a mental patient. I think frank taunting Gerard with the vampire thing is his hint to say 'I have a crush on your'. Or, he could just like to vex him. O_O Continue when you can!
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how Mikey and Gerard both prayed but in totaly diff. ways lol it's just very fitting. That last part was great, how he told him and the door slammed shut lol I can't believe that crazy is running the place, great plot twist. I want to know what happpened to Brian but I know we'll prolly find out as it goes on. Please update soon!