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by Trisa3d

schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I've read.The grammar was just about perfect,the spelling was correct,and the story was entertaining.The POV was bouncy,but you put a warning at the beginning of the story so it was to be expected.I'd love to read more of your work.Great job!
person HolyFuck666
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK!!! THIS IS HOT STUFF!! Waycest+Frankie= THE FUCKIN' BEST THING I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!! THREE CHEERS FOR THREE QUEERS!!!!!!!!!!
person waycest!! :D
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHAHA!!! ILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOU!!!
waycest+frankie=love!!
great story :D
person Jeni
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO! Hottest and funniest and overall best story on here! It was great! I'm at a loss for words!!! hehe
person Dead_Dollyie
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY HELL THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person C. Allen
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed this fic! *drools* Yes... really really enjoyed this fic... Ok~ So I'm fangirling over the fic. <3 Great writing. I'm so happy~

C. Allen
person Amanda
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! I never get tired of this story, perhaps it has to do with the fact that Im and exhibitionist as well, but its sstill hot as hell! You should so make another part where Ray and bob get some girl action going on.....all right giggty giggty giggty.
person red fire
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hells Yes! That was SEXY! Please write more stories
person Amanda
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this is like my third or fourth time reading this story, and it never gets old!!! I love the whole *shiver* I just love it!
person Vampire Valo
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hah, that actualy made me giggle alloud at the end. Waycesyt is a beautiful thing, no? And you've made it cuter by adding Frankie to the mix. :o It's like you're making a man-cake. Corny, yes, shut up. :)

For a PWP, I enjoyed it. ^^

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