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for Pathetic

by BloodyQuill

schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely delicious ^_^
I think you've done a great job with your writing; it's really descriptive and you use a lot of interesting verbs to keep thing going.
Maybe another short chapter on how Brian adjusts to becoming a vampire...maybe, please *puppy eyes*
person kamikazi
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was the hottest pwp i have ever had the pleasure of reading! i am begging you, please continue this!! i absolutely loved the ending.
person rychelle
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a very sexy dark sexy sexy fic