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for Not such a bad idea!

by KarinVAM

person Anon
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ryan should have said something like, "Well, I feel dirty. I'm going to go wash myself now!"
person Valo
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Sweetheart, I just re-read the whole thing, all in one whack, and gods I still love it! I almost fell out of my chiar laighing when I red in the second chapter, "Something that made itself very present, since Ville’s pants were tight, and he wasn’t wearing any underwear." I have no clue why, but I just did. I think the thought of Ville standing there, in his tight pants, with a raging hard on and looking like 'what the fuck should I do'? is just funny to me. Hot, but funny.

Also, I was reminded how shitty a writer I am compared to you. :P But, I'd rather be able to read that write. Especialy since YOU wrote it. Also, you need to update Ship wrecked!! I know you've got plans, but updateeee. Updaaaaaaaaatttttttttte feed me. :D

Anyway... there's nothing I can say that I haven't already said. Love you much!

-x-Valo
person Vicky
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
....*sobbing uncontrollably...d-dont..*sniffle* dont let it be over yet!... *more sobbing*... *finally gets herself under control* That was an amazing story! you seriously don't know how many bad days you've gotten me through! So for the last time...
Much love,
Vicky
person V.v.
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*speechless*

*can't stop smiling*

[x]V.v.
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Epilogue!
I loved it!
Hope you'll make maybe a sequel to the story of Willa and Bammies wedding.
;D
person punksbitch
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey!! i've reviewed on Vam but i thought i'd review here as well. i cant think of anything else to say that i didnt already say before! it was the most romantic thing i've ever read and it had me in tears! (im so sappy!!) and bam got to be the man! good work, i loved this story so much i'm gonna miss it loads. **goes into mourning**
person Raevyn
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my god!!!! the tears are falling like a water fall over here lol, such a fantastic ending and i am gonna miss the fic....you know what i think im gonna go read it all again lol xx
person punksbitch
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just realized i didn't comment on here for the last chapter and i felt really bad! you already know i think the whole story is incredible but i wish this wasn't the last chapter **cries**
person Raevyn
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for my birthday present lol.....ok im happy and im sad, happy cause it all worked out in the end for them and sad cause it's finished (sob). What am i gonna do now lol, are you planning on doing a sequel or a compleatly new story (inquiring minds wanna know lol) absolutley fantastic story babe xx
person Anon
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW

YOU

IT




UMM....




*Speech less*

love it but sad it over good fic man