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for Not such a bad idea!

by KarinVAM

person Vampire Valo
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHH!!! You! you, you did it, with the pool, and and then water, and the, the, the, "OH GOD VILLE" and and and -takes a breah-... Okay. Okay, I'm good now. -shiver-

I LOVE YOU. You just made my day. My week. No, my YEAR. I have SUCH the urge to print this out and staple it to my agenda book. But, then again... I'd get kicked out of school for that. ;D

I shall cherish this chapter forever, and read it every night before I go to bed. [[That will make for some *interesting* dreams, eh?]]

Sorry for the typos. I'm half asleep and I have a head cold, something vicious. BUT I CAN STILL READ, YAY!

Ahhhh, Aprrrrrril found ouuuut. Eeeeehehe, I love this. APPPPPPPPRIL FOUND OUT, AAAAAPRIL FOOOOOUND OUTTTTT...-repeats, over and over, is hit with a mysterious flying Pop-tart-

...DOn't mind me. I'm just a bit crazy. -huggles/loves/steals-hides you under bed right next to Marilyn Manson and across from Mikey Way, with a side view of Ville- :]

-sigh- I hate jelly. -scrapes it off, eats the peanut butter- ;P

GIVE US VAM SALAD. Teehee. Or slimfast.

I still can't get over the fact tha you WRITE it... eh he... I love youuuu!!!

...After I post this I'm gonna read it again.

[x]V.v. [[Did you notice my reviews are getting stupider and stupider? ...and stupider is NOT a word. Proving my point, lol!]]


person Savannah
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! OMFG!!! I HATE CLIFFYS! hehe but i f-ing luff your story, it is soooooo awsomly good! Cannot wait till the next chapter!
person Raevyn
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha busted lol, fatastic chapter hun as usual, lots more chapters to come hopefully? lol,looking forward to the next
person CassandraMalfoy
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey hon,

Glad to see this story had a wonderful update.
Oh, naughty Ville!
>:D
I loved reading!
person Vampire Valo
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, you say we're sweet to you? YOU'RE TOO NICE TO ME, GAH! -falls at your feet in tears of joy-

But really it's okay. I know how to deal with that shit. Er, well enough to keep me alive, that is. ^^; If I ever DO have troubles like that, I'll email you. ^^ [[Gosh, I'm a whimp...]]

ANYWAY!! New chapter. I LOVE youuuuuuu. I do, I do, I dooo... That was kinky. XD;;

I know it's weird, but did any of your ideas for the future involve Ville and Bam in the pool? -is a filthy little pervert-

-narfs jell-o, smearing it on her face and whatnot- I think I'm gonna wait untill you submit TWO chapters next time, because reading one at a time like this is killing me. XD

[[By the way, be proud that you aroused my friend. He claims he's straight, but I've think you've helped prove me right. ;)]]

Uhm... the omly thing I have if a Vam Sharpie. -hands it to you- BE BLESSED!!!

[x]V.v.
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ill make it simple OH MY HOLY HELL! i love u
person lee
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU! You're the only author I like that up dated their story. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person punksbitch
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe!!!! that was so funny and sexy and cute all at once!! i love this story, its amazing and i cant wait for the next chapter
person Raevyn
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh dear vilie's in for it now lol!another fantastic chapter hun, you are the master of vam lollooking forward to the next one xx
person Shui
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Thank you for the birthday wishes darling! Youre so sweet! And ah!! What a chapter...love!!! love it love it love it. Poor Bam though....tehe. And the more chapters you write, the more I'll love you. Lol