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for Wet Seduction

by squickdesu

person Gazette
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Continue por favor....
person Nao-chan
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
n-nV Yey~ You wrote smex for my favorite pairing. -pounces and latches- I really liked that ne?
person Kashshaptu
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fuck *_* this is so hot!

Please write more of this! *_* kxk is love
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was great! I love the sarcastic humor, it's really cute. And the "being zapped with a horniness-inducing laser", that just made me laugh. That's too funny. You've got a good writing style, a lot of writers struggle with third person, making it flow well. Anyway, Good job! I loved it.
person Skwishee
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you ^^
person KyoisHOT
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.o....woah..Marry me? -begs- XD
person E
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KaoruxKyo is love