rate_review Reviews

you should really add to this story! o plz do! i love all ur one shots. their amazing.

hey there your one shots are great wana do a story together or something?

God bless you and your story......*salutes*

To start with, I don't make a point of using correct grammar, or correct anything for that matter, in reviews. I just try to be casual.

Also, I only said that there were a few minor errors. There was, like, one word that was misspelled word. (It should have been 'hopped' not 'hoped') The tense was also changed at one point. It starts out in past tense using forms of '-ed', then changes to present tense.

I hate to sound like a bitch, as I love the story to death, but I hate when people correct me for trying to help an author out in reviews.

P.S.- No offense to the author. And again, I love the story!

Hey! I liked it. I picked up on some grammatical errors, but 'hey', no one's perfect!

I love it.

And there are no gramatical errors. I read it at least 3 times.
Not all of us talk the same.

Meh. Sorry to get catty.
But it's what I'm best at.

I love you!!!

PS: The review above my first one, is poorly formatted.

Sorry, but it really bothers me when people are [hypo]critical of my job.

I LOVE YOU!!!

=~ Tampon