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by chibikitten

person Jade Alchms
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!! Now you must write more! And hopefully faster than with the last one. You are so good at the emotional fucking of charaters, and I could totally see Randy as a little phyco, we all know its in him. poor Dave... And yes I need more. Please?
person Takerslady
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I knew it! I knew 'him' was The Undertaker, God he's beautiful *sighs while drooling*, as soon as I read it. I can't believe this, so Randy loves Taker, but Taker dumped Randy, and Dave is in love with Taker and Randy's his bestfriend. Damn. I just can't picture Taker and Randy together, Randy seems to self centered while Taker is so *sighs while fantasizing about the living God from the darkside, you know hpo it is LOL, dark and mysterious and intense. Oh no, i'm turning myself on, okay that was TMI! LOL. OMG! I just realized something, if Dave and Taker get together, then all of them would have had sex together, Randy and Taker slept together (still can't see it LOL), Randy and Dave have slept together, and then if Dave and Taker get together, they'll all have slept with each other ( I know I just epeated myself) EWWWWWW! Great beginning, even though I don't like that by the end they will all have slept with each other. Update soon. :)