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Oh God! You took so long to write that! So long!!!
And it was worth it! But... it took so long! Oh the humanity!
Yup, it's a travesty alright.

ps. your beta is not doing their job properly! There were many, many mistakes. With word order for goodness sake! WORD ORDER!!! *spazzes and dies*

Sun - I apologise for this, but I feel it's justified.

Gubblegum - since you haven't left an e-mail or anything I'll do it here. If you have a problem with the way I do things, please take it out on me. Don't complain in a public forum about it - you can see my username in the reviews and it's a link to my profile, which contains my e-mail address.

I'm only human and I don't claim to be anyone else. If I make mistakes I apologise and I'll do that now - I'm sorry I missed any errors, but I read it through a few times and found all I could. The story is legible and you can understand what is going on correct? Also most of the time the right grammar and terminology is used correct? Be grateful, because I've seen stories that are worse from native English speakers.

Again, I'm sorry sun, but I had no other way to contact Gubblegum.

I'm so glad you updated =D

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Forgot to mention - when you have the chapters for me to read through, just e-mail them me.

yay you updated!^^ your fanfiction is just too exciting!^.^ but i am very sad that for the first time i have some critique... i don't want to have any.. but i kind of don't like the new chapter (new chapter 8)not that much as i liked the others. please don't get me wrong and don't take it too serious because your style is still wonderfull and the storyline just great but the chapter just doesn't make sense to me.. i love your idea of közis and manas relationship (it is just too funny because my friend an me once joked about malice mizer (we love to do that with jrockers but especially malice) and their relationships and we had the same opinion about mana and közi as you!(my friend even wrote a really short "anti-fanfiction"(<-long story) about this pairing and it is quite like yours^^)i've never imagined that there would be someone outside that would have the same opinion^^just too great!well you are quite an amazing writer to us not only because of your style but because you just wrote down what we talked about!we were out of words. like i said: we had never imagined that there would be someone outside like you who shares this opion!^^) but to me the event where the whole "occassional love"began doesn't make sense. i think the situations doesn't fit together: mana is really sad and desperate because gackt announced his quit, calls közi to come over that he can have a shoulder to cry on and then they are ending up in bed together. the last part just doens't fit to me.. i think you wanted to point out the start of the relationship and the relationship itself of közi and mana in this chapter but the occasion is just not fitting to me... i am really sorry about saying this to you but i think that i should be honest so i am writing this to you.. but please don't take it too seriously!! i still am amazed about your fanfiction (you know that my opinon about fanfiction is rather very negative)and your writing improves in every new chapter!!
please be kind and don't mind my mistakes because i am no english native as well^^ sometimes it is hard to express my thoughts to you so i am usally repeating myself. i'm sorry-.- but if you need help in japanese i could offer help (native).
???????? i am looking for the new chapter^^
bey bey mizu

2nd part of my review^^: (-long story) about this pairing and it is quite like yours^^)i've never imagined that there would be someone outside that would have the same opinion^^just too great!well you are quite an amazing writer to us not only because of your style but because you just wrote down what we talked about!we were out of words. like i said: we had never imagined that there would be someone outside like you who shares this opion!^^) but to me the event where the whole "occassional love"began doesn't make sense. i think the situations doesn't fit together: mana is really sad and desperate because gackt announced his quit, calls közi to come over that he can have a shoulder to cry on and then they are ending up in bed together. the last part just doens't fit to me.. i think you wanted to point out the start of the relationship and the relationship itself of közi and mana in this chapter but the occasion is so not fitting to me... i am really sorry about saying this to you but i think that i should be honest so i am writing this to you.. but please don't take it too seriously!! i still am amazed about your fanfiction (you know that my opinon about fanfiction is rather very negative)and your writing improves in every new chapter!!
please be kind and don't mind my mistakes because i am no english native as well^^ sometimes it is hard to express my thoughts to you so i am usally repeating myself. i'm sorry-.- but if you need help in japanese i could offer help (native).
???????? i am looking for the new chapter^^
bey bey mizu

YAY! You updated! I'm so excited! WAH! So good, like last time! *huggles back* YAY! This is so wonderful! I can't wait for the next chapter!

hi ^^
I really really REALLY like you'r fic it's awesome.
I like everything the way that you make Mana and Gackt act it's soooo good
weel I can't write much because I speak in spanish so n.nU
but really I love this fic n.n
I hope read more soon, I can't wait
bye bye ^o^

This has got me all hot and flustered! You have the greatest sense of humor and you know exactly when to use it. I absolutely love your writing style. This story is just so realistic in such a sarcastic way.. I LOVE it. If you don't continue writing it, I may cease to live.

hey!
thanks for the 9th chapter! i was really happy to read it so soon! but i didn't meant to rush you with my words from my last review! take your time!! it is just so exciting^^ but even if you say that you had a bad day; that didn't effect your writing! this chapter again is very beautyfull! i really enjoy reading^^i just can keep on repeating that. keep on and i am already looking very forward to the new chapter! (but please no rape-.-)
greets! mizu