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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha! I love this add. Darren's confusion. Great development. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Anon
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's very nice ! Go on !! I waiting the next part ;)
Beatrice
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was such a defeat for Darren. I hope they don't keep drugging him so much. Daniel and Malachi sound like very interesting characters in this story. There is so much of the unknown in terms of what will happen to Darren!
Really great story so far! You've got me on the edge of my chair again!!
Anon
Really great story so far! You've got me on the edge of my chair again!!
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you picked this up again. A very good, tense add. I'm totally edgy about what will happen next, once he's sold.
Anon
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good "slave" story so far. Lots of tension. I like the undercover aspect. Good writing! Looking forward to more.