rate_review Reviews

This is really well written and has me completely involved. I really can't wait to find out what's going on with Orlando and the Ocean. On a side note, as a Star Wars fan, you have no idea how much it trips me out when Viggo calls Orlando Lando. The image in my mind instantly flips and it's Billy Dee Williams there instead of Orlando Bloom. I'm a dork, I know. Anyway, job well done, keep up the good work.

man i love this story!! whats wrong with orli!?
im dieing to know. i like how you wrote orli, dark and angsty.
continue and update!