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for Breathless

by xCookingWinex

person Tamora
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ive been looking for this chapter daily... a few times a day hahaha. i love this story so much!
person chino
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fuck that's not good...Alyn, what you doing???
I think she should kick his ass and then go kick her bosses ass...
More though please!!
person Tamora
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an AMAZING CHAPTER!!!! Y ou need to keep these coming haha
person Tamora
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh noooo... post more!!!!!
person chino
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naughty boys...bad, bad, bad!!
But...I love it!! SOOO MUCH!!
person chino
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww...actually, that cant be good!! But it can!!!
Oh and, she REALLY needs to kick her boss in the balls...she shouldnt have to put up with that!!!
person Tamora
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yayyyyy!!! More!!!!
person chino
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW...you wrote more!!! yay

I read this the other week and then saw you hadnt updated in like forever so I kinda gave up hope of having more and that's why I didnt review then!!! But then I had a dream about it randomly last night lol and I decided to check if you had actually updated!! YAY

ANYWAY, I loved this when I read it and I cant wait to read the next chapter coz I havent done that yet!!
person chino
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear!!! I sense bad BAD things are gonna happen!!!
Wicked chapter thingy though!!
person Tamora
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loooove this! You need to update ASAP!!!