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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how much this story amused me. I've read it more than once. It seems to me that you know quite a bit about Daisuke and Hiroyuki or at least their careers. I'd no idea that Daisuke smoked, such a fluff. I hate to sound like I'm begging, but I am. Please consider writing more fics?
My only concrit would be that you watch your spelling and grammar. I think maybe with a beta, your content would be awesome. But once again, I like it so much that I'm begging. ^^ Great effort! I had lots of fun reading this and your other stories.
My only concrit would be that you watch your spelling and grammar. I think maybe with a beta, your content would be awesome. But once again, I like it so much that I'm begging. ^^ Great effort! I had lots of fun reading this and your other stories.