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for Always Be Here

by dawnenab

person Reiko89
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with the story really love it!!!!
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is there more....I'm loving this story...Please tell me there is more.
person slc1
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am so glad that you updated and that Adrianna finally cleared the air with Orlando please I hope they will let the fun begin. Thanks
person slc1
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope all is well miss your story still hanging in waiting for updates it is such a wonderful peice of work
person slc1
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update IT"S BEEN AWHILE you must be busy i can"t wait to read what happens next
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for you to update!!! Love the sexual tension between Orlando and Adrianna. Love the Story.
person Evangeline
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nu uh girl you better update this like PRONTO! I can NOT wait to see what happens lol!

Yes I know I am demanding but hey I love this story!
person Jennifer
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, what a mess that was made by two people trying to figure out love? Loved the update, by the way. You have an amazing way with words. Your description of the beach and the conversation that happened was beautifully written. I am truly impressed with you ability to capture a moment. Please continue when you have time. Thanks
person jennifer
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you trying to kill us all here? Holy crap. I think I need a cigarette after that chapter. Where's my husband when I need him? Once again, lovely and beautifully written. Can't wait to here what he has to say about all of this. Thank you and have a wonderful new year.
person jennifer
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I love everything about it. How it's told, the views of all parties involved, everything. I can't even begin to put into words how wonderful and beautifully told this story is. Continue, please.