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for Keep your promise NOW TWO PARTS

by Hayley666

person Anon
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sappy ending but over all a good story.
person Valo
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, come ON! You can't call that a one shot... *plea* C'mon... it's BEGGING for a follow up.

Well... I can see the beauty of the mysteriousness, but meh... I'm awakward, I know. :D


Anyway... well written. A few cap. errors, but it's fine.

-x-Valo