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for Not for me

by KarinVAM

schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
honey that was so sweet! i loved it! *hugs and kisses*
person sadsally
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love how believable you made Ville and Bam, how each are so afraid to be in love with each other. its realistic, not all kiss, kiss, who cares that we have complicated lives. very very good. cant wait for the next bit.
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is such a beautiful story, it amazes me how you come up with all these amazing ideas! keep writing sweetie, i'll read anything you do!!!
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
honey im so sorry that i didn't review here sooner, i completely forgot **hangs head in shame** i hope you forgive me **gives you my best puppy dog look** i wuv you!!! this is beautiful so i'm glad i could convince you to do another chapter!!
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the poem in this one!! So beautiful! Yes please do add another chapter..one where missy and bam break up and he runs into ville's arms yah that would be nice!! lol.