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WOW dude! really strong chapter, update soon please xx

i can't wait to find out what happened to adam. excellent story.

Thank you so much to everyone who's reviewed! I'm so thrilled you all like this story. Some of it may not be very realistic (such as the giant bed in the back on the buses, which really isn't true...at least not for MCR. And obviously the way the guys act, since I don't know them and don't know how they really act.), but I had to have somewhere for Jordyn and Gerard to get it on, right? HAHA Actually, that doesn't end up being the first place. But you'll have to keep checking back for my updates to find out where they do it the first time. Thank you again for reviewing!! It means the world to me!!!!

Im glad the cop shot him,he's such a loser in this story!!! Gerard needs to show Jordyn that there's still good guys out there (like gerard!!!) small chap.but still really great!!!!!

I really like how you're dragging out the relationship between Jordyn and Gerard so it isn't so sudden and Mary-Sueish.

The suspension in chapter 8 is killing me. ; ;

This is one of my favorite fanfics so far. Keep writing! =)

It just keeps getting better!
Oh Mi!
You so have to update soon!

Aahhh! I hope the cops get Adam he really brings everybody down:(... wow Gerard and Jordyn were getting HOT !!! Please update soon!

Aww honey I love this story. Gerard is sooooo sweet. Me loves this so update SOON!!!

I love this storryy! i'm slowly getting addicted to it!!! loved the fight scene by the way! Go Gerard!!

fantastic hun! lovin every bit of it,just need more of it and all will be well in my little world!=)xx *R*