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schedule
February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you write so well. there's so much detail without it being overwhelming. i can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule
February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a little bit disjointed, but I think I see what you're trying to do. I do like it though, you're articulate - which is good to see. Hopefully you're planning on adding more to this, I think there is a lot of potential.