rate_review Reviews

Aw, I've been reading. I always feel bad when authors don't get constructive reviews and they've got really good writing. Hopefully this helps a bit? I do really like the story, it's really good to see someone writing something other than Vam - as wonderful as it can be when written properly. In my mind this is a weird pairing, but you make it work really well. You're doing a good job on keeping the interest up - giving bits and peices of the story, but not saying everything. I'm really interested to see where this will go. It seems like it has the potential to be one of those fics. that just tug on your heart strings and makes you either want to cry or go 'awwww!'

I've got nothing bad to say, I really don't see any errors as far as grammar, spelling or formatting. You're a good writer, nothing within your writing style that I feel the need to point out. So I know this isn't really a constructive review in the sense that it should be helping you better your writing - but I hope it's at least a bit of encouragement. People on this site should learn to hit that review link more often.

I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter.

AAW! poor bammie and ryan! i love them both, their so cute and you write them so well! please update

MORE PLEASE!