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for An Anchor in the world

by dragynphyre

person Kyouten
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS! If only so I can see how Hyde deals with Gackt...

I loved the intro. Hilarious. I can literally imagine Hyde saying that too...

The one thing I noticed was the odd switch of views... perhaps you could make that a little clearer? I dunno, maybe I'm just really picky, but that's really the only tiny little thing I could find wrong. Excellent job.

Keep writing!