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for If You'd Taken the Time to Notice Me

by Laura5402

person feenx
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, lol you made me think back I hope I didn’t do something similar to what she did.
person Eliza650
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I agree with Saryn, you should try a prequel, I'd love to look back and see the whole high school scenario firsthand.

I love your stuff, hope to see more!
person silk
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was hooooooot! until she died:( not hot
person Saryn
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loves it.

Prequel?
person emseeare
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I didn't expect that.... That was a great story though! Loved it... Oh and this is Bury Me In ALL My Favorite Colors (from myspace) btw... You're a fantastic writer. You AND Smooshy!
person LadyRevenge
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVED THIS BOOKIE! I must say it was a "shocking" ending, no pun intended! HAHAHHA