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November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I demand a sequel!!!!!
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September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.
My English is nowhere good enough to enable me to say everything I want to say about this story.
I've read lots of fanfictions in the past years and I also read a lot of books.
Not much of them were able to touch me and even fewer so intense like your story did.
The way you describe their feelings... it's more than telling 'He was sad'... it's like you give an instruction for the heart of the reader how it can feel the same way (I really really hope you get what I mean, 'cause I'm quite aware how pathetic this all sounds ;) ).
Parts of your story made me feel cold... some (like Till... roaming... flickering...) even kind of empty and then, there were other parts. Ones that made me breath again (for example the kissing scene on the roof top between Richard and Till) or even laugh (of course when Flake shows them the collar).
The way you write is so poetic. So full of pictures. And goes so absolutly well with the bittersweetness of this story.
Well I'll stop embarassing myself now... all I actually want to say is... this stuff is really great, you write like a goddess and so please please keep it up ;)
Yours
Raphaela
My English is nowhere good enough to enable me to say everything I want to say about this story.
I've read lots of fanfictions in the past years and I also read a lot of books.
Not much of them were able to touch me and even fewer so intense like your story did.
The way you describe their feelings... it's more than telling 'He was sad'... it's like you give an instruction for the heart of the reader how it can feel the same way (I really really hope you get what I mean, 'cause I'm quite aware how pathetic this all sounds ;) ).
Parts of your story made me feel cold... some (like Till... roaming... flickering...) even kind of empty and then, there were other parts. Ones that made me breath again (for example the kissing scene on the roof top between Richard and Till) or even laugh (of course when Flake shows them the collar).
The way you write is so poetic. So full of pictures. And goes so absolutly well with the bittersweetness of this story.
Well I'll stop embarassing myself now... all I actually want to say is... this stuff is really great, you write like a goddess and so please please keep it up ;)
Yours
Raphaela
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this! Maybe I'll be the only reviewer on this category! But I love your descriptions!