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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Howdy, good story ;)
Thought it could do with a bit more detail and emotional imagery, particular at the start and concerning Rose's not eating - his eatind disorder's kind of blown off as not important, and when his mom sends him away it was like 'okay, why? And why isn't his dad asking for paternity tests or anything?' it lost some realsim.
However! It was really interesting and pretty original, I like the characters very much though I hate Rose's boyfriend, the last chapter was like he doesn't even love him! It was really sad. So yeah, lol, if you ever update I can't wait to check it out!
Thought it could do with a bit more detail and emotional imagery, particular at the start and concerning Rose's not eating - his eatind disorder's kind of blown off as not important, and when his mom sends him away it was like 'okay, why? And why isn't his dad asking for paternity tests or anything?' it lost some realsim.
However! It was really interesting and pretty original, I like the characters very much though I hate Rose's boyfriend, the last chapter was like he doesn't even love him! It was really sad. So yeah, lol, if you ever update I can't wait to check it out!
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well! I will say that I don't normally read that much slash! Especially where Yoshiki is concerned BUT no worries! I am refreshed to see a different pairing. I like Heath! Always have. The plot is very different and I like that his son is Korean. Rose...that's also another intersesting name for a guy but I like it! That's quite a twist. I like how naturally Heath and Yoshiki's relationship goes together too. Keep up the good work. Hopefull this plot is resolved soon!! ^_^