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for A place in the dark

by Mcrmylife

person Belle
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i will give you my left arm to update and continue!!!!! SRSLY ADORE THISS
person MYSTERY
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i beg!continue!this is great
person emseeare
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is scary. i love it! please more!!
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh man, this is great.
I can't wait to find out what's going on!
person Smooshy
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWW!!!! This is GREAT! Part of me wass really excited because I thought I knew what was going on, but then there at the end I was like, nope, not even close. I love this, its genius and I demand the next chapter. Well fine, I dont demand, I ask nicely. Please. *bats eyes*
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to do three things with this reveiw, one of them is to say how well done I think this story is and that I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.

Two: I'm going to direct you to www.johndiesattheend.com and tell you to read it, you'll see why.

Three: You say you've got night terrors truly, well my dearling...I can't begin to relay to you all of the stuff I've seen and heard in my lifetime. If you find yourself needing....help....you can talk to me.

Again, the story is amazing, good job.

~Aviarianna O' Lorien~
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh the suspence! Love it!
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if i ruled the world, i would officially ban cliffhangers! lol great chapter hun update soon.
person Smooshy
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN THE CLIFF HANGERS..lol.. Now I know why people are always yelling at me about that. Aww this story is BRILLIANT on sooo many levels. The writing is great and the story is really well thought out. I love it and I eagerly anticipate another chapter SOON!