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for Faded hopes and Shredded dreams

by Mordeo

schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the ending much better. and a sequel would be awesome! except, i feel kind of bad for wanting horrible things to happen to these people again just so i can read another one of your stories... anyway, keep writting!
person Smooshy
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, well you totally left that open for a sequal, but then again I do that with alot of stories with no intention of ever writing more to it. So either way this was brilliant! It has inspired my next story, so thank you my dear. I cant wait for your next one.
person Smooshy
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing. The whole idea of possession is creepy in itself, but you wrote it incredibly well. The fact that you could love and hate Gerard all within one sentence just goes to show how well you write. And thank you so much for saying my twisted little self inspired you to write this. lol. Glad someone appreciates my darkness. Its so much more fun to write the dark, creepy and mysterious than fluff in my opnion, but then maybe thats because I'm no good at fluff. Anyway I want another dark story!! This was amazing!
person Smooshy
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know I love this story. Man that Gee is creepy, and yet you wanna hug him because he's Gerard too. Good job girl. I anxiously await Tuesday. :D
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you stop leaving town!! it's unfair to post such small and awesome chapters and then leave!!! you update!
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that's it? i wish you would have expanded more. i loved it anyway. and i insist that you write more stories. this dark side of yours is good...very good...yes...
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay gee's gone!!
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
grr!!!

i don't want it to be over!
it was so damned good!
person Eliza650
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If I had a birthday wish right now, I'd wish for a sequel!

Seriously, there must be more!
person Saryn
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...possession. Dark and dirty and dangerous. I love it!