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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was quite intrigued the further I got into it. I would like to see you finish it. It's a very good story and while I can see why things could be considered muddy with the shifting view points it still held my attention and I was able to follow it regardless. My wife and I both enjoyed the story very much and she agrees with me that it needs to be finished. We were both very happy to read your story.
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You must go on. I want to know if hide finds Yoshi or not before his flight. Pretty please?
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had an extremely hard time following your story... it's too shifty from POV to POV...
and I highly doubt that hide would have been that whiney
and I highly doubt that hide would have been that whiney
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok....I love the story so far!>< Its good. KEEP IT UP!
now u have a few grammar mistakes but dude who does not. So don't take that to the heart.
After all I got the whole general feel and tone of the story all right and there for that is all that matters.
Again I wana leave on a positive note. So plz continue it.
ShinnyKinz~
now u have a few grammar mistakes but dude who does not. So don't take that to the heart.
After all I got the whole general feel and tone of the story all right and there for that is all that matters.
Again I wana leave on a positive note. So plz continue it.
ShinnyKinz~
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more more more moremoremore MORE MOOORE MOOOOORE... ;)
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I really like this story.
I love how you portray hide san, so cool.
Please continue? I really like your style ^_^
I love how you portray hide san, so cool.
Please continue? I really like your style ^_^
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww you should continue this! I really liked it! The different povs and everything! Great job.
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your fanfic and I can't wait for more scens with hide and yoshiki. Update soon, please.
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you fic!!! I want mooore ;]
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I like it alot. It has a lot of potential.