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person Smooshy
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! But I'm a tad confused. I think I read the end to fast...Is Gerard into girls now?? WHats the world coming to?? hee-hee. Great job hun, cant wait to see what you come up with next!
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it!
I love the ending ^.^
can't wait for another story by you
person Smooshy
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I only hope Gerard can remember all those weird words he's supposed to speak. Awesome job dahling, and YAY for shark week!
person Smooshy
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO NOT RAY!!!! Oh that was scary. Frankie mutated. Yeesh! And poor Autumn. Ok bring on chapter 13 woman. I am so ready!
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this, and hun it is really, really good
post more!
person Smooshy
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was beyond creepy, and even though I knew lil Frankie doll wouldnt go down without a fight when it started shrieking I got chills. This is an amazing story. I'm still a lil bummed my theory about Bobbers was all off. Oh well, clearly you have done a good job with the mystery. Next chapter soon! Oh and this lil part made me lol. ..."he trailed off when Mikey looked at him as if he’d just said that he was the second coming and the world was ending tomorrow when the aliens arrived so they better all get their foil hats." hahahaha
person Smooshy
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shit now I have to go back and re-read it all so I can see who gave the blood sacrafice. Damn you! lol. This is one of my faves, oh and obviously my earlier theory on what was going to happen was wrong. Oooops. Clearly you're doing something right. Next chapter soon!!!!
person Smooshy
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I believe I know who the killer is...though I have an off handed theory that is probably way off, so I'll just keep that to myself. Bob the pervert. That was creepy. He's so cute though in his obsession, liking her so much that he's ready to go back to Tibet and vist the Dali Llama. I love this story so much. Ive been feeling shitty today so this was a nice treat. *Hugs*
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!! That doll thing freaks me out!
person Smooshy
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story so much. You are not allowed to go that long again without an update. Mikey and Autumn are too cute, and that was pretty effin hot if I do say so myself. I loved their drinking session and I must wonder...What did take Bob so long?? hmmmm