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for Haiku

by RangerPrincess

person Gab
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, this story is amazing! It's clearly one of the best ones I've ever read. I hope you update soon =]
person Starflow
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, although I predicted something like this it still impressed me. I really, really enjoyed reading that. I think it's criminal you don't have more reviews; criminal, I say! This sounds like it's going to be tragic, which just makes me want to read more of it. The characterisation is interesting enough and for an AU story this is really attractive to me - I don't usually read any AU stories, so this is special. Can't wait to hear more of this strangling regret Mikey seems to be plagued by...

Just one little complaint; the time tenses shift too irrationally. Pay attention them, gal. A couple of typos too but not bad ones.
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. It is interesting, and you develope there downfall.. there personalities and how they developed. Keep it up!!
person Starflow
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, damn...that was really intriguing. I was quite entranced by it. I've read little of your work, but I do think this was the best I've touched so far. Impressively enough. It did have some typos, though, mind you.

Nevertheless I'm actually quite fond of Frank & Mikey as a pairing, so I'd say keep posting. Seriously I think the bad feeling I have of this is more than justified, but it's certainly not a bad thing. I'll be more than happy to find out if I'm right, and this is definitely cute for an AU story (about which I'm normally very sceptical). I'm going to be back to read more, just so you know. /Chica/. Hehe.
person insdel
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awe, please update please oh please oh please! This is really good!!

~LilyRose~