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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so, could Ray be any more cute?! This chapter was just...ugh, so good! And while I was reading I had on my iPod and the music switched at all the right times, like when their music turned to a slow song, Mariah Carey came on my iPod with Outside and it was just perfect! Yeah so, I want more Ray sweetness! *_~ Update Soon!
~LilyRose~
~LilyRose~
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much for the review! Seeing as its my first public story, it made me very happy to see someone liked it! But anyway, its hard for me to guess where this story is going, and I like that a lot! It's very intriguing, so keep writing!!
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i feel like mikey, i'm lost too. who's falling all over natalie? but i love that bob's got his eye on a girl! it's so cute!
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm lovin this! Bob is too cute! And I can't wait for more about the musical! Update Soon!!
~LilyRose~
~LilyRose~
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i always pictured them all like they were in the i'm not okay vdeo. (even bob, he is in there if you look hard enough!)great chapter!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cuuuuute :P Keep up the good work
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man, i wish i had gone to this highschool...
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good start, interesting characters!
Can't wait to read more.
Oh and I love 'Bobert' that is just the best name ever.
Can't wait to read more.
Oh and I love 'Bobert' that is just the best name ever.
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it! mikey's such a cutie and gerard's seems nice. can't wait for more.
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this so far. Update Soon! And don't forget to feed the bunnies!! :)
~LilyRose~
~LilyRose~