AFF Fiction Portal
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...all I can say is wow. EXCELLENT dialouge for such simple topics. Love it!
person Smooshy
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing! The way you write is beautiful, and I feel for your main character,she just seems so lost, and Frank just seems like an arrogant ass, yet somehow that just completes his charm. I cant wait for the next chapter.
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a really good start.
So well written, very discriptive.I like it alot!
person Eliza650
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, look everyone! Quality writing!

Great start. xoxo