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This story was absolutely amazing! i couldn't put the phone down even though i was starving. of course i was hoping for kyo and jae to be together in the end and be one happy family, but with everything that transpired between her and kao...tough choice. i cant wait to read more!

well u have a very nice story here! ^^; it was really sad some times but over all it is well written and a story dat made u want 2 keep on reading. im a lil sad...well im really sad dat ur on hiatas now and i respected dat but i hope u update soon^___^ i love dis story and i think ur a really good writter.
i hope ur doing well and cant wait 2 c dis story updated!!

Took me a couple of hours but once I started reading this fic I couldn't stop. Great job. Can't wait for the next chap.

I have to say I don't get it... maybe I am biased, or something, but I don't get how Jae can even think of loving Kaoru just as much as Kyo when Kyo and her shared years of love and longing, and a child, while her with Kaoru is something barely recent and going for the length of what, a couple of months? They didn't even know each other before ^^;;;; Not to mention, at the end of the 21st chapter, Jae had realized Kaoru was right, her heart belonged to Kyo, and now she changed her mind again? And says she loves Kaoru even though he pretty much raped her there and she cried herself to sleep due to him? Not to mention, she loves Kyo just as much but she is not guilty about being fucked by Kaoru while he is in the same house? I understand she is Kaoru's girlfriend at the moment, but the heart doesn't usually accept labels that much, I would have thought she was bound to feel something of the sort... I'm not judging, and I know you can and you have to write your fics however you want, but I found the chapter quite incoherent... and Jae suddenly got more naive or something... that's just my opinion though... hope you won't get angry at me...

I admit, when I first started I was 'iffy' about it and I actually stopped reading it, I'm extremely picky about what I what I do and don't read... Curiousness and my own pet peeve about not finishing things I start dragged me back and after a few chapters I was totally engrossed. I read all 22 chapters in one sitting.

You are an amazing writer, I've never experienced the kind of pain the characters are going through but I could actually 'feel' it along with them, if that makes any sense at all. You had me gasping, 'awwing', frowning and feeling the characters pain throughout the whole story...

And I cannot wait for you to write more!

<3 BurialApplicant

OMG i just reviewed and it deleted it.
Fucker. Ok.
I love this chapter...it was worth the wait....Closer to Ideal fits so perfect, I read it while I was reading and got all weepy. I love your Kao-you have captured him and his ability to shut down emotions when he feels they wont profit him. However, this ability causes him to have like an emotional overload going on, hence the rough sex-which was soooo awesomely hot...The Bruises, not so much. I love her explanation of loving them both. This story is so emotionally heavy and you handle it so well. Like I felt everything-I think I need a freakin nap from the emotional wave.
All the songs fit perfectly...and I didn't know you liked Gackt!!!! haha!

So worth the wait!!!

Poor Jae - life must be difficult =[[

Oh god, that was so painful, from the first chapter I was whipped to read them all in one night XD I'm glad Kyo finally went home >< and that the bitch is not pregnant.. I hope things will look up for them now, can't wait for the next update <3

This is definitely one of my favorites i've EVER read. Maybe it's because it's actually believable (that very rarely happens).

I love it and can't wait for an update.[:

I can't put into words on how much I love this story. I can't wait to read more.