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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I simply love this story.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... Basically all I can say is that I agree with Dizzy ^^
Awesome update!
Awesome update!
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all i just wanna say THANK THE CHRIST that you updated. I was dying.
K...now that that's out of the way...I really like how this chapter went. I like the fact that it was funny before it got serious, i think that helped because it wasn't too overwhelming for the reader that way...too much drama can just be too much.
I also like the friendship between them, as you know. It seems real to me, makes me think that's probably how they really are.
POOR KYO. I'm glad he decided to own his responsibilty. I do feel bad for him about that Hitomi bitch but we all knew she was bad news. I also feel bad for Kaoru, cuz it's clear he loves Jae and wants to be with her. I also like the fact that kyo explained things that may have been unclear to the reader as well, it kind of made his relationship with that slut make sense.
IM WAITING FOR THE MAKE-UP SEXXXXXXXX!!!! :)
And I LOVE TOSHIYAAAA!!!! He's so cute in this chapter. I wanna squeeze him.
K...now that that's out of the way...I really like how this chapter went. I like the fact that it was funny before it got serious, i think that helped because it wasn't too overwhelming for the reader that way...too much drama can just be too much.
I also like the friendship between them, as you know. It seems real to me, makes me think that's probably how they really are.
POOR KYO. I'm glad he decided to own his responsibilty. I do feel bad for him about that Hitomi bitch but we all knew she was bad news. I also feel bad for Kaoru, cuz it's clear he loves Jae and wants to be with her. I also like the fact that kyo explained things that may have been unclear to the reader as well, it kind of made his relationship with that slut make sense.
IM WAITING FOR THE MAKE-UP SEXXXXXXXX!!!! :)
And I LOVE TOSHIYAAAA!!!! He's so cute in this chapter. I wanna squeeze him.
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...God *dies* I just love this story so so so so fooching much XD Please update soon^^
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This fic is fantastic! I can't believe I didn't read it sooner! Very well done! I hope to see an update soon!
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY.
KYO IS ACTING LIKE A MAN AND NOT A DEADBEAT DAD.
i can't WAIT to see the shit hit the fan with Hitomi that slut. I'm so excited i can hardly sit still just THINKING of how Kyo is going to blow up on that garbage woman.
that's what you get kyo, when you date a slut like her...i hate to say i told you so but..."i told you so."
now that i've thoroughly pissed kyo off, i'll run away now. LOL
KYO IS ACTING LIKE A MAN AND NOT A DEADBEAT DAD.
i can't WAIT to see the shit hit the fan with Hitomi that slut. I'm so excited i can hardly sit still just THINKING of how Kyo is going to blow up on that garbage woman.
that's what you get kyo, when you date a slut like her...i hate to say i told you so but..."i told you so."
now that i've thoroughly pissed kyo off, i'll run away now. LOL
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw another chapter! *Dances around*
Though I still find myself so frustrated, God damn I just want to bang Jae and Kyo's heads together now! It's slowly but surely sending me mad. That said though you do have a fantastic way of building and expressing emotions in your writing.
Can't wait to see some more, rather sooner that later I hope! :P
Though I still find myself so frustrated, God damn I just want to bang Jae and Kyo's heads together now! It's slowly but surely sending me mad. That said though you do have a fantastic way of building and expressing emotions in your writing.
Can't wait to see some more, rather sooner that later I hope! :P
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last line describes this chapter perfectly. POOR JAE. I just feel bad for everyone. Kaoru's trying so hard but he can't really make her feel better...even with that AMAZING SEX.
God it was so...desperate. This was the perfect time for a scene like that, because it really conveyed how Jae was feeling and the way her life is going better than words. So much push and pull trying to get what she wants, and still not getting it.
I'm glad she has someone in her life like Axel who can be there for her and not make her feel ashamed for being vulnerable too. I also love how you put the song in there. That song is PERFECT for this chapter. Davey just knows how to speak about lonliness. *sigh* I listening to the song while i read the chapter, and it was like perfect timing. Actually that whole cd, Decemberunderground, is like the perfect soundtrack for this story. I'm glad Jae got her Kiss and Control from Kaoru, but i think its gonna complicate things for them, especially if kyo finds out!
I need to go read it again...
And KYO NEEDS TO GET IT TOGETHER. GOD. Nothing could be worse than them not talking, even if they were fighting. He just needs to man up and go see his damn kid. DEAD BEAT DAD.
update SOON!
God it was so...desperate. This was the perfect time for a scene like that, because it really conveyed how Jae was feeling and the way her life is going better than words. So much push and pull trying to get what she wants, and still not getting it.
I'm glad she has someone in her life like Axel who can be there for her and not make her feel ashamed for being vulnerable too. I also love how you put the song in there. That song is PERFECT for this chapter. Davey just knows how to speak about lonliness. *sigh* I listening to the song while i read the chapter, and it was like perfect timing. Actually that whole cd, Decemberunderground, is like the perfect soundtrack for this story. I'm glad Jae got her Kiss and Control from Kaoru, but i think its gonna complicate things for them, especially if kyo finds out!
I need to go read it again...
And KYO NEEDS TO GET IT TOGETHER. GOD. Nothing could be worse than them not talking, even if they were fighting. He just needs to man up and go see his damn kid. DEAD BEAT DAD.
update SOON!
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update!! I was al excited when I saw that this was posted xD This definitely made my mood better, seeing as some chick on this one forum accused Kyo of plagiarizing his lyrics ><
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the story! Your writing style is so great; the way you describe emotions and situations. Amazing. You even made me cry.
You describe the feelings of Tristan so well, too. It kind of reminds me of my own expierences.
And God, I really hate that Hitomi girl. ;p
Well, I am really looking forward to an update! :)
- Toxick
You describe the feelings of Tristan so well, too. It kind of reminds me of my own expierences.
And God, I really hate that Hitomi girl. ;p
Well, I am really looking forward to an update! :)
- Toxick