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for Aberrance

by MementoxMori

person xxDizzyxx
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT. SO sad.

Stupid Kyo. GET YOUR FUCKING SHIT TOGETHER ALREADY!!!

the lyrical timing was perfect, this chapter really was poetry.

damn you kyo.
person Firework
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I was so excited to see an update!
The thing is you made me cry, poor kid. I love how this is unfolding slowly even if it is torture.
I think your writing has a fantastic natural pace to it never once seeming rushed.
Can't wait to read more!
And if appropriate, Merry Christmas
person Firework
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At last! *Flails*
Now you've got me paying attention again I want more!
Oooh... its getting so interesting too
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter! I love your writing style, and I was soooooo excited when I saw you updated! XD Can't wait to read more!
person Dark Avenger
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sad... I wish he'd found the doctors card and found out she's a lying bitch... but later, I guess. Maybe that'll force his hand toward not being an ass to Jae... who knows.
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read this over and over, and I still cry!!!! :( I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!
person Laura
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Can't wait to see what happens next!
person Dark Avenger
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for sending me the update for this! ^__^

I can't remember... have I invited you to be a guest author on my site or not? If not, here's the invitation. Will you be a guest author on my site? http://www.cadkitten.com Let me know either way, yes or no. If yes, please send me an email with your birthdate in it and I'll set you up with all the necessary info. ^__^

~Dark Avenger
person Firework
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sits and cuddles Tristan*

I feel so sorry for the poor kid, even more so now!
It still seems things are going to get worse before they get better. I'm just wondering now what Tristan is going to be like when he see's Kyo next. I'm beginning to think it's not going to be Kyo's response we're going to have to worry about.
The kid certainly has a backbone.
I'm loving every second of this, I can't wait to see where it goes next!
person kaoruslilvamp
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Kyo steps up and quits being an ass lol. Great chapter! I wonder what Jae will do when Kaoru talks to her in the morning?!?! Hope another chappy is coming soon, take care!