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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it :) All of the little interactions, whether it was between Kelly and Stephen- or the sets of siblings, it was great, funny and realistic. Carrie and Kelly were also cute as heck. I do wonder though where everyone is going to sit once Narvel and Reba show up lol.
I'm glad Kelly's sis took the news so well, and Carrie's sisters too. Thank you so much for updating the story, it was awesome.
I'm glad Kelly's sis took the news so well, and Carrie's sisters too. Thank you so much for updating the story, it was awesome.
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, the 50 mile stone, awesome. I loved this chapter, they were both so cute and I loved the way they kept teasing and reassuring each other. I really hope everyone'll react okay though, like they accept it, even though they may not agree, like Ashley. You really do write amazing though, 'cause it's so realistic. So, yeah, there you go..haha
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I think it's safe to say that Carrie's sisters know lol. Cool update, I loved all the little interactions between Kelly and Carrie. Is it okay that I want Carrie's parents to see the papers, and for Carrie's dad to get protective of Kelly and Carrie? Both girls were really upset at the end of this chapter, but it was cool that they both tried to be there for the other one. I know that's dorky, but I think it's shows that they're doing better than just girlfriends. :)
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy that Carrie's dad came around and saw things from Kelly and Carrie's pov. They were super cute during this update. I know it's probably dorky, but I really liked that they were playing 20 questions, or a question game lol, with each other. They're just so cute with each other, I don't know what's going to happen to them next, but I'm sure it will be good. It could be Kelly getting to know Carrie's sisters better, and I'd still enjoy it.
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, so, usually I'm not into the whole girl/girl thing, but I kinda like this story. You just write their relationship so well, like so cute. It's an awesome story, so, that's all I wanted to say actually..
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like seriously loved this chapter. You did a really great job of being funny in nice little spots, so that it didn't mess with the sadness of the situation :) I also really liked that Kelly tried to talk with Carrie's dad, though I'm not sure how well that will end up, it was cool that she tried. I fell bad for not mentioning anything else specifically, but I really liked the update as a whole, very cohesive.
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I am glad U are back.I was so missing this fic. I love hat they were caught getting it on by the COWS. That was clasic!!!. i think Mr. Underwood will see the light so to speak...I love how Carrie's sister is such a big fan of Kelly-very cute. Great job!!!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Umm, I loved when Carrie said that she didn't have go karts, lol. I really liked this update, and I'm glad that Kelly and Carrie have family that is on their side. This is gonna sound weird, but I'm also glad they fought about Carrie's dad's reaction. Things aren't always good, sometimes people are self-pitying, so that was cool and realistic :) Can't wait to see what happens next.
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow-things are starting to heat up....I am still loving this story...somehow I think Carrie's parents allready know..
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Random, but I'm glad Kelly's mom is gone for a while, it was so not cool of her to give Carrie meat. I know that was a long time ago storywise, but I'm playing catch up and trying to comment on things that stood out the most. This whole story is cool though :) I like Kelly's vulnerability in this story, and it's easy to see where it comes from, so even when she's being extremely critical of Carrie's feelings, I think it makes sense. I like that Carrie gets it sometimes, when Kelly is being so self-doubting (does that make sense?), and that Carrie misses it sometimes. They're still new with one another and adjusting, especially because they don't live together, so I think it's realistic that Carrie doesn't see that Kelly is nervous and doubting them in the current update. I do hope that Carrie gets to find out though, I want them to have a nice visit. I think you do an excellent job balancing the angst with the happy times.