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My heart just stopped.. Which is funny 'cause I figured they'd get married some day, right? But just that final sentence stopped my heart..

I've been following every Kelly/Carrie story I can find but this one, this is my favorite.. There isn't a single chapter I did not like. This is truly amazing. I'm already feeling bad knowing it has to end at some point..

oh my gosh, great chapter...please let kelly say yes and not freak out on carrie.... please update soon......thanks for the update

I've been a silent reader for a while and i'm taking ds opportunity to congrats u on ur amaaaazing fics of KC. I just love every single one of 'em! The last part of Playing With Fire, all i gotta say is...OMG!!!!! lol...pms of ds brilliant fic!

But... it... she... I... WHAT FUCKING KIND OF AN ENDING IS THAT!? Say yes, say yes, say yes! She must say yes or it will shatter everyone's heart. That was beyond brilliant. Amazing, so amazing. Damn near had a heart attack when I read the last line and saw that you had left it on a cliffhanger. Should have known you would've written something that amazing but not given us an answer, lol. I'm a little bit worried about what Kelly will say because looking back there've been a lot of hints of them not being ready yet but that might have just been a cover up because I'm pretty sure if Kelly says no it'll break Carrie's heart and alter their relationship. The next chapter is gonna be interesting, lol.

That... she... CLIFFHANGER! How can you just stop it there?! Kelly's gotta say yes, she's just gotta! Like violence said, the next chapter is going to be a huge turning point in their relationship, whatever Kelly's answer is. But lord, this whole chapter was spectacular and that last scene was just so amazing, I'm glad they talked stuff through before Carrie said the last line.

I thought the proposal would have happened in the chapter where Kelly got Carrie in the little private plane, so I was kinda surprised when it didn't happen then. I thought it was sweet of Kelly to plan a romantic night for Carrie, to remind her of the upside of being in a relationship with her, but I liked it that Kelly wasn't upset when she found out Carrie just wanted to stay in the bus. And of course I laughed when Carrie accidentally yelled at Jason because she thought it was the worker lady.

I have a bit of reviewing to do... dumb vacation and no internet. Anyway, onto the review. I love that you include so many actual events, it really adds to the fic. That poor limo driver in 87... hahaha. Oh man, "Baby, Ashley scares me." Lord, that had me laughing so hard. But I loved the Carrie/Ashley bonding time and all the banter they have before they leave. And I so remember that video! It's one of my favorites, so funny. The rest of that chapter was just plain adorable. Hahaha. The leaked songs... oh boy. I do love that Carrie went all out in her youtube reply, so damn sweet of her. The hand and dirty videos comments, too funny. And the meanings behind the songs, I love how you worked them to fit the fic. Totally not digging how Kelly has to defend her song, but I did dig Carrie's comment about being a back-up singer. Haha. And finally, the last chapter, I was awwing at the "'They have signs' 'I have you'" bit. Honestly, Carrie's reason is kinda spot on for some, sad as it is. While I love Kelly defending Carrie, that was so not the way or the place to do it. I practically melted out of my chair when Carrie brought up their future problems, now they have those to look forward too with all this happening.

i feel like i haven't commented in so long. sorry about that. i really love all three of your stories so much.
you're such a great writer.
this story is getting better and better. i loved that little scene when carrie hugged kelly and rested her face against her stomach. such a little detail yet so cute and memorable

It's little things like this "They have signs.""I have you," that make me look at the screen with complete glee. I really really hate that people are stupid enough to believe that Carrie could beat Kelly. I mean the girl can't even throw a plate at a wall without wincing, covering her eyes, and cowering. "They view you as very sweet and honest and friendly and just all around bubbly; they view me as, well, a stuckup bitch is the term I hear most." I loled hard at that because it's kinda true. Okay, so it was pretty reckless of Kelly to flip out on a mob of thousands but I would have done the same thing. It'd make anyones blood boil having someone you love so much be slandered so heavily and not having any way of protecting them. And then Carrie's little speech about different problems make be burst with joy, loved that. I wish they'd do an interview to set things straight because even I'm feeling frustrated at the stupidity of the world.

great update, very sweet. thanks for updating, i am glad someone still is. your they only one anymore that is dedicated to us readers... thanks again keep up the great work..