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by classic06

schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Guess I spoke to soon when I said it was good that the magazine hadn't hurt Carrie, lol. Narvel's call was funny, and I go a kick out of Carrie commenting on youtube with cursing. Hackers suck. At least Kelly wasn't like sad because of it all. I mean obviously she was, but she had Carrie there. :)
person Violence
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yo, Aben's got major beardage going on now. The man needs to shave. "I think you cursed more in that one paragraph than you have since I've started dating you." Coming from Carrie that was really damn sweet. Lol, at the hand and dirty videos comment. The explaination for those songs were beautiful. I completely love how you fit those in to match up with their relationship. Fuck, the shit's really gonna hit the fan this time. Carrie's gonna have worse than little old lady's coming after her now. "And that's what makes me love you even more, and is why I'll gladly drop it all to be with you." Awwwww. They're so fucking adorable together even when the world's against them. I'm delighted that they talked about that because I wouldn't want one of them doing something stupid like running off. Although at this stage in their relationship it's very very unlikely. Loved this.
person greens28
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update...Very sad about the songs being leaked..especially the one that is gonna make Carrie look bad. They will work through it though-U are writing such a complex and wonderful fic. I love how realistic you are writing their realtionship-the ups and downs. Great stuff..look forward to more.
person greens28
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter-very funny. I freaking Loved it!!!!!!!
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good to know that the magazine/article thing wasn't a big thing :) Carrie seemed really apprehensive to shopping with Ashley, though I wouldn't want to go shopping either if my girlfriend had been as sweet as Kelly had been during the last few chapters. There were a lot of funny moments, it was nice for this story because pretty much all of it has been drama. I love drama though, so it and funny work for me. Cool update.
person Violence
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've done a mass reviewing and this is my final stop. woohoo! "Baby, Ashley scares me." ROFL is the only thing I can say to that. I'd like to see Ashley kick Carrie's ass one day for leaving a mark, though it'd be more hilarious than violent. Then again I do love me so quality Ashley/Carrie bonding time. Hahahah, I remember that particular vid. It's almost as bad as the one where they're at the red sox game. The rest of this was pure gold. So. Achingly. Sweet. And the end was like rawr.
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Carrie anxiously awaiting the preshow ritual was pretty funny, lol. They were so cute and concerned for each other in this update, but I really liked it when Kelly decided to go to the airport to see Carrie's family off. She could have rested, but she went because it would make Carrie happy. They are so caring, sweet update.
person greens28
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just keeps getting better & better. Awesome job!!!
person Violence
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, damn, that was totally sweet when they were talking about their future together. I felt kinda proud. Again I love the incorporation of real events into this fic, makes it so much cooler. I loled really hard at the last ten lines or so of this update. Poor limo driver... actually that'd be one lucky bastard.
person Jay
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I just read this whole story - 56 chapters last night and the rest today - and can I just say that I freaking love this story? It is like AMAZING! I have a great dislike for Kelly's mom, she was like such a bitch. But I'm just in love with Carrie and Kelly as a couple - they fit so well. I hope you update soon because I already read Irreconcilable Differences (which yeah, blew me away) and I'm gonna tackle your other two asap, and I just can't wait for more of this story. You're an awesome writer and I love how you write both Kelly and Carrie. Love it.