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for Playing With Fire

by classic06

schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved how Carrie kept saying that it was still her birthday somewhere, lol. Dude, Kelly must be made of Valium to get Carrie on a private plane. I laughed when Carrie called the plane 'little', so true. Kelly was majorly sweet, but completely right when she said she screwed herself over in the present department. I can think of only one thing that could outdo a birthday like the one Kelly planned. Cool update.
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely adorable and cute and yet sad and heartbreaking and I love it. I found myself at the edge of my seat while reading this one, waiting to see what you would have counter Carrie and Kelly next. And while I love some drama, I love all the fluff and happiness that has settled in for now. The drama with Clive and all the press is so life-like, it adds a great realistic feel to the story. I really loved this last chapter, I mean, wow, Kelly sure knows how to spoil her girl thoroughly. Haha. I definitely can't wait for the next update.
person sugar
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was really, really beautiful. what a nice mental picture too (them riding on a white horse in ireland hehe )

that must be one of the best chapters so far. or a least one of my favorites. great job! :-)
person greens28
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! So happy to see a update. Kelly planned such a romantic birthday for Carrie-Ireland was a great idea. I love that they are so romantic with each other-it is very sweet. I love it!!! I can't wait to U update again.
person Violence
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW. That was completely adorable and sweet and every other adjective like it. Ha, Kelly really did go all out and spoiled the hell outta Carrie. I think you might have cut the ending off a little early, lol.
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
heyyy:):)
Just wanted to tell you I still love the story!! so dont you end it any time soon!! I know i havnt reviewed in a while!! sorry!! hope everything is well!!
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the link, that was neat :) Carole was too funny, going on about being upset she couldn't spend the day with Carrie for her birthday lol. It was nice that Jason thought of Carrie flying alone (bringing Ace), even Kelly forgot. Little Ace was cute too, turning his head away from Kelly. I'm glad Stephanie and Carrie made up. Kelly did pretty good for a girl who has had some bad relationships. Really sweet update, it was nice to see some of their family together to celebrate Carrie's birthday.
person Violence
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm excited to finally get an update on this story. I think it was starting to feel neglected. Still can't believe they got her a pony. So jealous. Damn, I just realized we're like a year behind in the time. I remember when it was ahead of the time, lol. "I just promised to take good care of it...and you...but mostly the horse" hahahahahah. Hey, wow, surprise birthday. how fucking sweet is that? I seriously think I awwwed and squeed my way through this chapter. Enitrely too cute. Nice way to end it too.
person Mo56
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:) nice chapter :)
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's a good thing that no one is really saying stuff to Carrie about the article. They have been through a lot, so I guess little old ladies are a lot less harder to deal. I do wonder though what words the old lady knew, lol. Carrie should have chilled out with her sister that gave her the little key chain, though it was nice to see her talking with her (older?) sister about her relationship with Kelly, sorta. Why was there a koala backstage for Kelly and her gang to pet? I think I missed something lol.